change of idea for commemorate - Helena, Max & Kate

openning final plan(commemorate);

setting;

• brambletye school - East grinstead.
• kitchen - using Kate's kitchen.
• set in 2010 and second part 2012

- Oliver is late for school, and being driven by his mum.  He will be late for assembley.
- Blank screen with voice over of oliver and his mother talking.
- see car pull up and oliver gets out.
- he runs into school and his mother drives off.
- As he gets into school he sees three guys walking towards him, that havent noticed him.
- Oliver's friend liam pulls him round a corner from behind.
- Liam tells oliver to 'shh'.
- the 3 guys walk into hall where assembely is taking place - the boys just see a glimpse of them walking in.
- Liam and Oliver hear screams and gun shots.

- fades to black with Title.

- Oliver 2 years later sitting in his kitchen staring at camera.
- then looks down at newspaper and camera ( focus pull) on title ' School re-opens after shooting'..

The end of openning.